Hey, the lineart looks good? Of course, since I traced it from that preview image for the upcoming episode of XYZ (XYZ 22) which I had enlarged first. I would have used the normal anime colors for this one but I just wanted to color it in my own as so it would not be a COMPLETE trace

Even without my edit Serena still looks like she wants to jump Ash's (which I assume is unconscious) bones in broad daylight at any moment.