While it is a good thing that you manage to reduce your usual mistakes from five to four,

As a working adult, no miss is the standard. So please try harder

Um... The dinner last night... was delicious, um...

If you get nervous, your bangs will fall down you know

Sure, and since going out for a dinner did lessen your mistakes, what should we do next?

P-

PLEASE HAVE A DATE WITH ME!!!

Sure~