Hello! Thankyou for your request!
So here I made some adjustments
First is I changed the lollipop to a pockey, idk but it give more ambriel vibes
Second is I moved or double the RI logo on her jacket, the actual is on the ambriel cloth but it’s not visible, and I think would be good if the logo is visible, because she will definitely wear her jacket everywhere
Third is I made a bit different SR from your reference sheet, but it’s not too much. Probably. And I really confusing for this part when she hold the SR, cause in the reference, the character hold an AR with a grip, but SR doesn’t have a grip.
I think it’s all, I’m sorry if I made this adjustment without your consent, cause I can’t contact client if it’s pixiv request. Hope u like it. Thank you!