How is it?Mmm... well, basically it's got this really great feel to it, but...See this part here? I think it'd be better off in the second half.I just think it'd be more balanced that way.Yeah?Yeah.I guess so. Huh, I see....'s kinda how it feels to me....was I a little too hard on you?I said it's fine!If you weren't, what'd be the point in asking you to look at it?I wasn't too sure about that part myself, anyway.Who's going to write the rest of this?Uhh... Shigeta, right?...hmmm.Mmm... but, personally...Don't you think it'd be better if you wrote the rest of this...? I mean, it's full-on yuri *g*Oh yeah? I figured you'd think that too, Ogiue.
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