To grab readers’ attention in a story

a bold hook can be really important!

Commander, I think I’m pregnant.

Overly dramatic. but still digestible.

Comrade, I think I’m pregnant.

Very dramatic. Harder to digest, but could still work.

Hey you, I think I’m pregnant.

Extremely dramatic. Difficult to digest, hard to understand, but still makes you curious about what’s next.

Written & drawn by Wehihi