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食べ尽くしてくださいね
椛さん、退場。導入が長くなりましたが明日から
文ちゃんを性的に食べます。
制限時間は120時間>post #1951685
導入の雑談。なんか今回やたら本題に行くのが長くなってしまいました。
見切り発車で始めるものじゃないなーと反省しつつ…
余談ですが読み手側としては薄い本の導入は短い方が良い派。
その分ラウンド数多い方が充足感あるよね…。いっそ1P目から繋がってくれててもOKです。
Please Eat Her All Up
Momiji, out. This intro got kinda long, but starting tomorrow we get to sexually eat Aya-chan.
Time limit is 120 hours>post #1951685
Intro P.S: this time I got kinda random and our path to the main dish took quite the detour. Looking back, I'll just say that I didn't want to start things before everybody had a chance to get on board...
Digressing even further, from the reader's perspective, there are those who would prefer the introductory parts in doujinshi to be shorter. Then there's the feeling of satisfaction you get from a nice, big, round number...well, if you'd rather link page 1 directly to this point, that'd be fine, too.
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